Nice story and development... Good puzzles.
Excellent for new players... BUT... I can point some things that annoyed me:
1- At some poits have page link unfinished (p. XX)
2- Could describe the merits at characteres page
3- I missed a scratch of Deimos Energy Solutions plant with some interesting points
4- Bans and Banes Effects
And for Gods sake.... Translate your materials to Portuguese.
We have a HUGE base @Brazil and we are still playing V:TM 3rd Edition just because we dont have material in our language.